PLS DO WRITE ME

Hi all of you.... Actually, I m posting blogs since last year... But as evrybody nees an Critic for his/her works.... So do I!!!! PLs, even i want my blogs to be read by bloggers. As to judge myslef, My poems, My feelings which i had written in this.. WAITING FOR THE READERS COMMENTS. THANX :)

Akele-Hum

Zindagi me ek waqt aisa aata hai, Jab har koi aapse bichud jata hai. Har nazar us 'Ek' ko dhundti rehti hai, Jo aapke dil ke kareeb hota hai. Wo Insan jab samne aaye.... To hoth muskurate hai, Chehara Khil jata hai, Ankhen Chamakti hai aur, Pau khud-b-khud uski aur chale jate hai. Na jane dil-e-nadan kyu aisa hota hai, Ki jiske liya hum itne utsuk hote hai, Wahi hame nazar andaz karta hai. Wo khud nahi samazta, Ke hum bhi uski dunya me shamil hai. Wo khud nahi dekhta, Ke hume bhi wohi pasand hai. Par aab baas tanhai hai, Kyu ki uski naukri beech me aye hai. Door jakar hi wo samaz paye!! Ke hamne bhi pyar me thokar khai hai!!!

ALWAYS...

Have a Look on this wonderful poem " I took your love for granted, Could not see through my blind eyes, I did not know how much I loved you, Now, in pain, I realize. You've found someone, I know you, Love,But the flame you lit burns on, I've really got to let you go, I must accept... you're gone. I wish I could just rewind time To how it was before, But however much she loves you now, I will always love you more.""

raksha bandhan

these rituals...so interesting are!!! These days..so enthusiatics are!!! Wonder why we dont follow them now? Wonder why we dont allow them now? A pious bond between any Girl and a Boy; Treat it with sanity so all will rely!! Bandhan is not what it is; its a tie in your mind which is!!

frdship

whats Friendship??/ I wonder..... In distress i find myself alone, Where no one to help me out. A light of hope... came from the dark path. Here it is!!! I remember...of my forgoten friends. Friends are always there ..at any path of your life.

duniya

duniya ye duniya.. kitni baimani hai. na koi kisiko janta hai...na koshish karta hai. kab na jane aap bhi aaise ho jate hai! kab na jane aap bhi is duniya me kho jate hai!!