PLS DO WRITE ME

Hi all of you.... Actually, I m posting blogs since last year... But as evrybody nees an Critic for his/her works.... So do I!!!! PLs, even i want my blogs to be read by bloggers. As to judge myslef, My poems, My feelings which i had written in this.. WAITING FOR THE READERS COMMENTS. THANX :)

Akele-Hum

Zindagi me ek waqt aisa aata hai, Jab har koi aapse bichud jata hai. Har nazar us 'Ek' ko dhundti rehti hai, Jo aapke dil ke kareeb hota hai. Wo Insan jab samne aaye.... To hoth muskurate hai, Chehara Khil jata hai, Ankhen Chamakti hai aur, Pau khud-b-khud uski aur chale jate hai. Na jane dil-e-nadan kyu aisa hota hai, Ki jiske liya hum itne utsuk hote hai, Wahi hame nazar andaz karta hai. Wo khud nahi samazta, Ke hum bhi uski dunya me shamil hai. Wo khud nahi dekhta, Ke hume bhi wohi pasand hai. Par aab baas tanhai hai, Kyu ki uski naukri beech me aye hai. Door jakar hi wo samaz paye!! Ke hamne bhi pyar me thokar khai hai!!!

ALWAYS...

Have a Look on this wonderful poem " I took your love for granted, Could not see through my blind eyes, I did not know how much I loved you, Now, in pain, I realize. You've found someone, I know you, Love,But the flame you lit burns on, I've really got to let you go, I must accept... you're gone. I wish I could just rewind time To how it was before, But however much she loves you now, I will always love you more.""